3 out of 3- Great7 out of 7- Excellentequals 10 out of 10 100% A+Good job with the message, and characters. They show the scene very well.
Graders Name:tony kScore: Layout: 3 Content 7 Total: 10/10Comments:
Nice job showing her ID stolen but you needed to give your audience a tip at the end. . . . How to guard against getting your ID stolen.8 1/2 / 10 Nice job with html embed code on your blog.JLang
3 out of 3- Great
ReplyDelete7 out of 7- Excellent
equals 10 out of 10
100% A+
Good job with the message, and characters. They show the scene very well.
Graders Name:tony k
ReplyDeleteScore: Layout: 3 Content 7 Total: 10/10
Comments:
Nice job showing her ID stolen but you needed to give your audience a tip at the end. . . . How to guard against getting your ID stolen.
ReplyDelete8 1/2 / 10 Nice job with html embed code on your blog.
JLang